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Poems
By: Artst

Poems are totally sweet,
they rock the socks right off my feet.
If I wrote a poem, it would probably suck,
Because I lack the ability to rhyme on a consistent basis.
©2007-2009 ~Artst
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Submitted: November 20, 2007
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My English teacher challenged me, or rather, my whole class, to write a concrete poem. For the uninitiated, a concrete poem is a poem in which the words form the shape of what the poem is about.

Being a lazy and crafty individual, I endeavored to write my poem about poems, thus allowing me to write it in the shape of a poem.

Needless to say, she didn't accept this, but she thought it was pretty funny. If it's good enough for an English Major, it's good enough for you.

Uneducated louts. (JK) (LAWL)
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I like it!
It's an honest self-examination and ...
whatever, it's funny!

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Things need not have happened to be true. Tales and dreams are the shadow-truths that will endure when mere facts are dust and ashes, and forgot.
Nice. Totally original. ^.^
I like it but I think you put a comma in the wrong place and have way to many words in one sentence. Makes it a mouthfull- But without the critique of mine it's good and funny.

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I'll lol your lol. So come on, I dare you to try me!
Thanks. I'm not really a poet, but I do my darnedest.

I also have a tendency to over use commas, see? ,,,,,,,

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Such a wonderful phrase...
Thanks.

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Such a wonderful phrase...
Thanks a lot.

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Such a wonderful phrase...
kewl. I like using esclamation points excessively....an periods.......please excuse the spelling)

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I'll lol your lol. So come on, I dare you to try me!
Glad you liked it.

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Such a wonderful phrase...

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